After previewing all of the other group's trailers we all gave each other good and bad feedback before making changes to our work.
These are the results we recieved.
Good:
Fast cuts
Shows a certain amount of information but doesn't give the plot away.
Scene in the studio
Dark shots/night time
Shot on the stairs/at the mirror
Screaming
Acting
Establishing shot of location
Trapped in a haunted house
Headlight shot
Lighting
Tragic past coming back to haunt you
Mysterious
Hand sliding down the door shot
These are the results we recieved.
Good:
Fast cuts
Shows a certain amount of information but doesn't give the plot away.
Scene in the studio
Dark shots/night time
Shot on the stairs/at the mirror
Screaming
Acting
Establishing shot of location
Trapped in a haunted house
Headlight shot
Lighting
Tragic past coming back to haunt you
Mysterious
Hand sliding down the door shot
Bad:
Shot of main girl at the sink
Don't understand the relevance of last shot.
Delete the talking bit at the end that shouldn't be there
Improve text/titles
Lack of variety of shot types
Sound could vary
Production company logo needed
Unsure about the plot
People crawling
Need more titles about the other people in the trailer. E.g the ghosts etc.
Unclear shots
Not very pacey
Hand sliding shot was too long
Shot of main girl at the sink
Don't understand the relevance of last shot.
Delete the talking bit at the end that shouldn't be there
Improve text/titles
Lack of variety of shot types
Sound could vary
Production company logo needed
Unsure about the plot
People crawling
Need more titles about the other people in the trailer. E.g the ghosts etc.
Unclear shots
Not very pacey
Hand sliding shot was too long
Results compiled by Georgina
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